懒人 说:

静静的夜晚
（懒人 译）

床脚下这么亮的一束光，
难道已经起了霜？
爬起来看，我发现那是月光，
重新躺下，我突然想起了家。

静夜思
（懒人受LP启发后译）

床前明月光，
疑似地上霜，
举头望明月，
低头思故乡。

我看老外翻中国的古诗时理解很有问题，比如“举头”和“低头”，翻成了Lift myself和Sink

back。

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wolfboy 说:

实在看不出来韵味，老外的诗词理解不了意景。我自己写的，贴在这里，给你助兴！
　　　　　Kiss your tears, my girl

Kiss your tears, my girl,
What make you so sad that tears are rolling downing from your face?
My heart was broken when I saw the sorrow on your countenance where the sweet smile should be;

Kiss your tears, my girl,
Why your bright eyes are full of confused?
Who are taking away all of sunshine that gave you a joyous time for a while?

Kiss your tears, my girl,
Come and sit down by my side if you love,
I would like to wipe off your tears with my kiss.

Do not hasten to bid me adieu, my girl,
Just remember the Red River Valley
And the cowboy that’s loved you so true.

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逸风 说:

[font=宋体]游民们整日闲逛，做些正事吧，把这些诗译译，出个译文诗集，弄到加拿大卖卖。 嘻嘻[/font] ，译对了加声望的啊。

A SPRING MORNING

​

I awake light-hearted this morning of spring,
Everywhere round me the singing of birds --
But now I remember the night, the storm,
And I wonder how many blossoms were broken.

春眠不觉晓，处处闻啼鸟；夜来风雨声，花落知多少？​

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wolfboy 说:

汉译英（原创）

情人Sweetheart
你是我的情人，像玫瑰花一样的女人。用你
那火火的嘴唇，我在午夜里无尽的销魂。
you are my Sweetheart,the woman like a
rose.you make me being overwhelmed with
joy by your kiss in the midnight.
你是我的爱人，像百合花一样的清纯。用你
那淡淡的体温，抚平我心中那多情的伤痕。
you are my Sweetheart,as pure as
lily.you comfort me my broken heart
with your warm body
我梦中的情人，忘不了甜蜜的香吻。每一个
动情的眼神，都让我溶化在你无边的温存。
my dreaming Sweetheart ,can't forget
your sweetest kiss.every lovely look
from you,make me feel melting in your
sweetness.

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wolfboy 说:

谱不重要，汉译英才重要。。。哈哈哈哈，practice everyday.. practice every where..

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