虽然我英语也不是很好,但是可以帮你稍微改改,其实你这样写会好很多
Young looking man in his 30s would like to meet a young woman. I hope you are a slim and interesting person. We can go fishing, travelling and cooking together. Starting from friends is a good idea. If you are interested, pls email me at XXX. pls write me in English or French, since we are living in this bilingual city, we are supposed to be able to speak both official languages. For better settling down and also enjoying the life here. How do you think? if you live in Montreal, that would be perfect. We can make friends and enjoy the spare time together. Do not message me if you don't want a serious relationship.