柠檬花园--加拿大第十山地师 - Part 4

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回复: 2005年北京Case议事大厅~柠檬花园/第十山地师

小弟我准备回复的信如下,你再慎重地给我把个关,我就发走了,主题写什么能吸引VO呢?哈哈小弟,姐姐惭愧哦

Dear Sir/Madam,

How do you do? My name is SKQ and my File Number is B*********.My birthday is 13/10/1968.

Though it may have disturbed you, I am writing to make an enquiry over my application. As you know, we took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. The case status changed into “7” on Jan.23, 2009.. Since the waiting time is keeping getting longer and longer, Today I find “7” change “23”,but I have received no correspodence from you since I took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. My case status remains 7 ever since then.So, it is highly appreciated if you you could be so kind as to give us an response why the status “23” will be changed.

Thank you very much and look forward to your reply.

Kind regards,
Yours faithfully
skq
My Mobil phone:\\\\\\\\\\\
 
回复: 2005年北京Case议事大厅~柠檬花园/第十山地师

小弟我准备回复的信如下,你再慎重地给我把个关,我就发走了,主题写什么能吸引VO呢?哈哈小弟,姐姐惭愧哦:wdb19:

Dear Sir/Madam,

How do you do? My name is SKQ and my File Number is B*********.My birthday is 13/10/1968.

Though it may have disturbed you, I am writing to make an enquiry over my application. As you know, we took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. The case status changed into “7” on Jan.23, 2009.. Since the waiting time is keeping getting longer and longer, Today I find “7” change “23”,but I have received no correspodence from you since I took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. My case status remains 7 ever since then.So, it is highly appreciated if you you could be so kind as to give us an response why the status “23” will be changed.

Thank you very much and look forward to your reply.

Kind regards,
Yours faithfully
skq
My Mobil phone:\\\\\\\\\\\
 
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回复: 2005年北京Case议事大厅~柠檬花园/第十山地师

小弟我准备回复的信如下,你再慎重地给我把个关,我就发走了,主题写什么能吸引VO呢?哈哈小弟,姐姐惭愧哦

Dear Sir/Madam,

How do you do? My name is SKQ and my File Number is B*********.My birthday is 13/10/1968.

Though it may have disturbed you, I am writing to make an enquiry over my application. As you know, we took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. The case status changed into “7” on Jan.23, 2009.. Since the waiting time is keeping getting longer and longer, Today I find “7” change “23”,but I have received no correspodence from you since I took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. My case status remains 7 ever since then.So, it is highly appreciated if you you could be so kind as to give us an response why the status “23” will be changed.

Thank you very much and look forward to your reply.

Kind regards,
Yours faithfully
skq
My Mobil phone:\\\\\\\\\\\
划线部分改为“I found my case status changing from "7" to "23"”, 其余OK:)
 
回复: 2005年北京Case议事大厅~柠檬花园/第十山地师

小弟我由改了一下,你看呢?

Dear Sir/Madam,

How do you do? My name is SKQ and my File Number is B*********.My birthday is 13/10/1968.

Though it may have disturbed you, I am writing to make an enquiry over my application. As you know, Today I find my case “7” change “23” ,I is so surprise : I have received no correspodence from you since I took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. My case status remains 7 ever since then.So, it is highly appreciated if you you could be so kind as to give us an response why the status “23” will be changed.

Thank you very much and look forward to your reply.

Kind regards,
Yours faithfully
skq
My Mobil phone:\\\\\\\\\\\
 
L

lemon25

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回复: 2005年北京Case议事大厅~柠檬花园/第十山地师

小弟我由改了一下,你看呢?

Dear Sir/Madam,

How do you do? My name is SKQ and my File Number is B*********.My birthday is 13/10/1968.

Though it may have disturbed you, I am writing to make an enquiry over my application. As you know, Today I find my case “7” change “23” ,I is so surprise : I have received no correspodence from you since I took medical examination on Jan.1, 2009. My case status remains 7 ever since then.So, it is highly appreciated if you you could be so kind as to give us an response why the status “23” will be changed.

Thank you very much and look forward to your reply.

Kind regards,
Yours faithfully
skq
My Mobil phone:\\\\\\\\\\\
大姐,下划线标出的部分,建议修改为:
I found my case status changing from "7" to "23", however, I am so surprised that:
 
回复: 2005年北京Case议事大厅~柠檬花园/第十山地师

小弟太谢谢了,我今晚就发,后天要到杭州开会
我的邮件主题写:why is 23?行吗?
 
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