回复: 一大清早抓了一个贼
不知道你是不是交过作业了,感觉没有太强调你的feelings,比说这人向你扔斧头你是多么害怕,当你不顾一切后果抓住他的时候又多么害怕他会伤害你,之后回想起来又多么害怕此人报复你的家人等等,如果可以的话考虑加上这些。这段可以稍微改一点点:
On Oct 30th,2010, approximately at **** hrs, a male perpetrator appeared to be *'*"(高度), **lb, broke into my garage for unknown reason(你并不清楚他是盗窃或者其它原因). the perpetrator attempted to attack me with an ax when he was found in the garage.
physical handling was utilized by me to control the perpetrator, police was informed immediately of the situation. Police responded to the incident and took the perpetrator safely into their custody.
no body was physically injured in the incident. (最好加一些心理上的伤害这里,包括对直接参与人(丈夫)的伤害,对妻子的伤害,以及你们对小孩谈起这些事后的伤害)
I believe that I am putting myself and my family members in more danger by making a citizen's arrest since this perpetrator is highly dangerous and violent.
Based on the above mentioned reason, I believe the risk of retaliation is high, I am asking for a forbidden order to be issued to prevent this perpetrator from getting close to my family members.
On Oct 30th,2010, a man broke into my garage and tried to steal the tools in the garage.When he was found, he try to attack me by an ax.
Fortunately,no body was hurt and no other damage was caused except the lost of the ax packet in this incident.
Because I gave assistance to arrest him,and he was tring to attack me with weapon in this case, there is very high potential risk that he will take a retorsion after.For my family's safty,I ask for an order that forbid this guy to be 3 block close to my home .
不知道你是不是交过作业了,感觉没有太强调你的feelings,比说这人向你扔斧头你是多么害怕,当你不顾一切后果抓住他的时候又多么害怕他会伤害你,之后回想起来又多么害怕此人报复你的家人等等,如果可以的话考虑加上这些。这段可以稍微改一点点:
On Oct 30th,2010, approximately at **** hrs, a male perpetrator appeared to be *'*"(高度), **lb, broke into my garage for unknown reason(你并不清楚他是盗窃或者其它原因). the perpetrator attempted to attack me with an ax when he was found in the garage.
physical handling was utilized by me to control the perpetrator, police was informed immediately of the situation. Police responded to the incident and took the perpetrator safely into their custody.
no body was physically injured in the incident. (最好加一些心理上的伤害这里,包括对直接参与人(丈夫)的伤害,对妻子的伤害,以及你们对小孩谈起这些事后的伤害)
I believe that I am putting myself and my family members in more danger by making a citizen's arrest since this perpetrator is highly dangerous and violent.
Based on the above mentioned reason, I believe the risk of retaliation is high, I am asking for a forbidden order to be issued to prevent this perpetrator from getting close to my family members.