这位叔叔期待有十一个回贴,小朋友的作业很变态啊,
13岁小朋友写诗太厉害了。我孩子13岁时也没听他们说要写诗,学校周末舞会到是听说过,而且几乎每次都去。只要提个醒,13岁小朋友什么点可以发挥成一首诗就很感激了,
sky
peaceful, tranquil
waiting, watching, listening
watching on top, staring from deep
weaving, yelling,summoning
dangerous,stormy
ocean
好贴 赞sky
peaceful, tranquil
waiting, watching, listening
watching on top, staring from deep
weaving, yelling,summoning
dangerous,stormy
ocean
应该是灰衣叔叔红衣叔叔:
我在写的时候也是特意做成菱形
可是上传后就变成了普通的形式
好奇怪哦……
sky
peaceful, tranquil
waiting, watching, listening
watching on top, staring from deep
weaving, yelling,summoning
dangerous,stormy
ocean
谢谢!这样就成一首相当不错的,有中国文化的,真正的,英文诗歌了。朗朗上口darkness
谢谢!
有个加拿大人建议将 where 改为 as:
The sky's
Calm and tranquil,
As the stars look down
At the yelling ocean of storm after storm
Of darkness.