请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

[xiaopangliuhao]

August 29, 2010
To Whom It May Concern:

I am the general manager of XXTechnology Development Co., Ltd, It is engaged in research and development of software and hardware for digital publishing and digital printing. I am glad to write this letter of recommendation for Mr. XX. Who had worked in the company from April 1998 to May 2003.The first three months, from April 1998 to July 1998, he worked for internship and his monthly salary was 900 Yuan during the internship. His annual salary and benefits was about RMB 50,000 Yuan when he left.

The positions he had held were:
1. Match, 2002 -April, 2003: Internet site developer;
2. August, 2000 - Match, 2002: client support representative;
3. July, 1998 - August, 2000: systems tester;
4. April, 1998 ? July, 1998: Intern

Mr. X's main duties and responsibilities are as follows:
1. Develop firm web site architecture and determine hardware and software requirements. Responsible for the programming, layout, visual appearance and usability of the web sites. Responsible for web site's operation and maintenance.
2. Maintain client support case database, provides analyses and recommendations on application improvements. Write user guides, technical manuals. Provide technical support via e-mail and phone to end users as well as system installation and training.
3. Development and specification of test plan and testing flow. Write detailed problem descriptions and test reports. Bug tracking;

Mr. XX had mainly taken part in the following projects:
1.Maintop Desktop Publishing System v3.2 & v5.0 system integration testing, helping system develop, write user reference manual & user manual, after-sale technical support.
2.XX Newspaper Design System v1.0 user requirements analyses, system integration testing and after-sale technical support.
3. XX company official web site building and maintain.

Mr.xx is a quick learner and took every chance to improve himself. he resigned from our company for advanced study in 2003.
If you need further information, please feel free to contact me.

Yours sincerely
([FONT=宋体]推荐人签名[/FONT])
[FONT=&quot]The manager of XX
Tel: 0086-
Mobile Phone: 0086-

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[xiaopangliuhao]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

谢谢英语高手帮我看看啊，我写了好久，汗一个！！！英语水平有限。

 

[lzx1005]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

貌似不错了。帮顶一下给英语高手看看，顺便也学习了。

 

[美琳]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

我不是高手，但也在准备，楼主写的挺好啊
我能借鉴一下吗

高手再给看看，有什么问题，我学习

谢谢

 

[green_mile]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

August 29, 2010
To Whom It May Concern:

I am the general manager of XXTechnology Development Co., Ltd, a company that is dedicated to research and development of software and hardware for digital publishing and digital (delete) printing. It is my pleasure to provide this Letter of Recommendation for Mr. XX, who worked at our firm from April 1998 to May 2003. In the first three months, from April 1998 to July 1998, he worked under an internship and received a monthly salary at RMB 900 . Nonetheless, Mr. XX's annual remuneration, other benefts alongside, reached RMB 50,000 by the time he left .

The positions he held were:

1. Match, 2002 -April, 2003: Internet site developer;
2. August, 2000 - Match, 2002: client support representative;
3. July, 1998 - August, 2000: systems tester;
4. April, 1998 July, 1998: Intern

Mr. X's main duties and responsibilities were as follows:

1. Developed firm web site architecture and determine hardware and software requirements. Responsible for the programming, layout, visual appearance and usability of the web sites. Responsible for web site's operation and maintenance.
2. Maintained client support case database, provided analyses and recommendations on application improvements. Wrote user guides, technical manuals. Provided technical support via e-mail and phone to end users as well as system installation and training.
3. Development and specification of test plan and testing flow. Wrote detailed problem descriptions and test reports. Bug tracking;

Mr. XX had mainly taken part in the following projects:
1.Maintop Desktop Publishing System v3.2 & v5.0 system integration testing, helping system develop, write user reference manual & user manual, after-sale technical support.
2.XX Newspaper Design System v1.0 user requirements analyses, system integration testing and after-sale technical support.
3. XX company official web site building and maintaining.

Mr.xx is a quick learner and has taken every bit of opportunity he could to improve himself. He was always considered a highly valued talent at our firm, although we have not been able to retain his service due to his later decision to leave us in order to pursue an advanced study in 2003.

If you need further information, please feel free to contact me.

Yours sincerely
([FONT=宋体]推荐人签名[/FONT])
[FONT=&quot]The manager of XX[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Tel: 0086-[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Mobile Phone: 0086-[/FONT]

 

[green_mile]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

杯具了，回了个8月30号的贴。。。。才看到时间。

 

[甜蜜的事业]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

杯具了，回了个8月30号的贴。。。。才看到时间。

热心人啊！英语高手，向您学习致敬！

 

[xiaopangliuhao]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

杯具了，回了个8月30号的贴。。。。才看到时间。

呵呵，喜欢恐怖片的，家园的熟人了。。。就给其他XDJM参考了。

 

[美琳]

回复: 请看看我写的英语推荐信，是否有需要更改的地方

我学习了。谢谢GREEN MILE