请高手帮我修改一下询问香港的信

[friendly1301]

想要询问香港已经回信给我说他们确认已经收到我们的数据
但是在网络上查看有显示RBVO，不过一直显示两句话
所以想要确认一下进度
请高手帮我修改一下
谢谢
Dear whom it may concern,

My application number is E0000XXXXX.My first name is XXXX and surname is XXX.

I would like to inquire about my status about my application for permanent residence in Canada in the Federal Skilled Worker class.

I got my application number at 28 June 2011, and HONG KONG VISA OFFICE sent me a letter that showed my application for permanent residence in Canada has been received by Citizenship and Immigration Canada (CIC) on 2011/07/18.

I check my status on on-line service that shows my status is Received By Visa Office for about one and half month. Therefor I write this letter to inquire that do I get further processing?

Yours sincerely,

 

[yorkshire-old]

回复: 请高手帮我修改一下询问香港的信

共lz参考。一个半月不太长，对等待来说

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing this email to inquire the status of my immigration application under the Federal Skilled Worker Class.

My application file number was issued on 06/28/2011 and I received a confirmation letter from the HONG KONG VISA OFFICE, indicating that my application package was received on 2011/07/18. My case status on the CIC website, however, remains as "Received By Visa Office" for one and a half months.

I am wondering, therefore, whether I have missed any instructions from the visa office or whether I should provide further materials to facilitate the processing of my case.

My case information is shown below:

Applicant's File Number: xxxxxx
Applicant's Name: First name XXXX
Surname XXX

Should you require further materials or information, please contact the applicant via email.

Yours,

XXX

 

[jenniferwei]

回复: 请高手帮我修改一下询问香港的信

我是不也要发个信问问了啊？

 

[friendly1301]

回复: 请高手帮我修改一下询问香港的信

我是因为看跟我差不多时间的人都已经IP了
有的还已经ME了
但是我还是在RBVO，所以才会想要写信去问问看