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回复: 快九周岁的乐颠颠上学记![杂谈]

又两天没有更新了。 唉,这里麻雀都少了!
 
回复: 快九周岁的乐颠颠上学记![杂谈]

乐妈好,到新单位2周了,忙得晕倒, 到家园来竟有一种久违的感觉,好亲切.老公是个喜欢享乐的人,所以你写的国内路线一直是我的dream place.看来也要向你学习,早日做一个真正独立的人.乐乐也颇有你的风尚呢. 快乐每一天
 
Earth's natural resources-what are resources? By Uma (le dian dian)

Earth's natural resources are the things that all the life form needed.The resources are the things that's found on earth's surface or under ground that meet our needs and wants.
Earth's natural resources could be renewable or non-renewable.The renewable resources can renew them self in many ways and in 1-100 year to renew.For example:the salmons can lay eggs to renew them selves to reprouduce more.The non-renewable resources needs a looooooooonnnnnng time to renew them selves.Like minerals , there best "food" is time.When the non-renewable resources was used up,they need a thousand or a million years to be avilable again.
Resources can also be living or non-living.Living resources are they resources that grows our being alive before we used them.For example:Trees.Trees grows,trees are alive!Non-living resources are the resources that don't grow and not-alive .For example:minerals.Minerals ain't alive they were forming and not growing.:wdb1:
 
Earth's natural resources-woods

Woods are one of the example of living resources.Woods are very valuable resources,their trunk can used for lumbers or buildings because their trunk is sooo strong,not a bit bad than the cements,only bad thing is not sound -free.The bark of the tree was dryed carefully to make chewing gums of Indians.The inner bark was soft, so it was dryed and made into clothings.The branches can make into fire,it's also a good thing for forest survivers.:wdb6:
 
Earth's natural resources-water

Water are really important for every kind of life forms.Water can used for many things:drinks,home for marine life,even important chemistry work that saved the world!Waters never can be destroyed but changing.Water are creating a cycle called a watercycle.Water cycle inclues evaporate,turn to clouds and raining.It works like this:some of the water evaporate and turn into clouds,and the clouds get heavier and heavier with evaporated water,so it rains out they water, like a diet!
 
Earth's natural resources-minerals

Minerals are the delegate of non-living resources.Minerals inclues diamonds,gold,silver,limestone and many more.Minerals are usualy used for wants,specificly,woman's wants.Diamonds are the hardest ore that's found and also the worstest mineral in the world.Gold and silver is usualy for rings or castel's celebrations.The others were usualy for buildings.
 
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乐颠颠写的?
的确是偶写的!:wdb20:这是偶的作文!
乐颠颠老妈说:乐颠颠用了近1.5小时在电脑前自己输入的。看得老妈头昏眼花,嘿嘿!不看也罢!不知道再过10年,老妈能否也这样写通篇洋文!
 
最后编辑: 2007-06-16
回复: 快九周岁的乐颠颠上学记![杂谈]

真是不错!没想到一年的功夫乐乐能够写出这样的文章!
不过好象有点点语法问题哟!我没仔细看,不过一眼看去water如果仅仅是水的意思的话,应该是不可数名词,后面的谓语应该是单数吧!还有些地方是不是应该用被动语态啊!can be used
再看看,我也不是十分肯定,因为我现在正在学习,而我以前学的语法差不多都还给老师了,正在往回捡呢!
 
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真是不错!没想到一年的功夫乐乐能够写出这样的文章!
不过好象有点点语法问题哟!我没仔细看,不过一眼看去water如果仅仅是水的意思的话,应该是不可数名词,后面的谓语应该是单数吧!还有些地方是不是应该用被动语态啊!can be used
再看看,我也不是十分肯定,因为我现在正在学习,而我以前学的语法差不多都还给老师了,正在往回捡呢!

哥们,不是我偏心自己的女儿,我觉得最好别太在意他们的语法。
上次我也说了她两句关于语法的事,谁知给她劈头盖脸的用“我们老师说我对”的话呛得半死,God Konws她们的语法课是咋上的!
反复声明,我现在也有点搞不清他们在上啥课,但管它哪,慢慢会好的。
Anyway,谢谢对我女儿的关心,请继续指导,绝无他意,只是说说我的感觉而已。
 
最后编辑: 2009-04-24
回复: 快九周岁的乐颠颠上学记![杂谈]

哥们,不是我偏心自己的女儿,我觉得最好别太在意他们的语法。
上次我也说了她两句关于语法的事,谁知给她劈头盖脸的用“我们老师说我对”的话呛得半死,God Konws她们的语法课是咋上的!
反复声明,我现在也有点搞不清他们在上啥课,但管它哪,慢慢中会好的。
Anyway,谢谢对我女儿的关心,请继续指导,绝无他意,只是说说我的感觉而已。
唉!我真希望我的老师也不管我的语法!他明明知道我说的是什么,但每次都在我的卷子上改得到处是红的!
不过才学英语一年的小学生写成这个样子真的是让我们这些学了十几年以至几十年的大人不好意思!希望我儿子过一年也能写出这样的文章!
 
Earth''s natural resources-the ecosystem

Earth's natural resources is forming a system called a ecosystem.A ecosystem is a natural system that life form and plants living together as a chain:for example , if we killed a thousand of mice,a fox is going to dead with hungry,a thousand of fox is dead, a lion is dead with hungry.......Anyways,never kill to much animal,or else........The world's food chain is messed up!:wdb5:
 
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回复: 乐颠颠老爸回复

哥们,不是我偏心自己的女儿,我觉得最好别太在意他们的语法。
上次我也说了她两句关于语法的事,谁知给她劈头盖脸的用“我们老师说我对”的话呛得半死,God Konws她们的语法课是咋上的!
反复声明,我现在也有点搞不清他们在上啥课,但管它哪,慢慢中会好的。
Anyway,谢谢对我女儿的关心,请继续指导,绝无他意,只是说说我的感觉而已。

乐妈说的对.

曾经拿着女儿错误百出却被老师批注:WELL DONE而无任何修改的作文去咨询老师,老师说她可以写出来就非常棒了,要多鼓励孩子积极用英文思考写作,总是纠缠语法错误,她会失去写的快乐.几个月过去,果然有效.
 

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