该死的英文， 总是让我有挫败感

[sabre的马甲]

我也就是瞎说一气
英语的运用 欠着微妙
得罪冒犯 自己不知道 抱歉

 

[Tin Tin]

大字报里面的内容是你写的呀……还不能引用了……

 

[———]

大字报里面的内容是你写的呀……还不能引用了……

你有病啊？我从来就没搭理你，你没事儿找事儿啊？我妈的就不走了怎么样？我发贴是我的自由，怎么说也是我的自由。你看不惯也没办法。我就这个脾气。看不惯你可以屏蔽。

 

[———]

我也就是瞎说一气
英语的运用 欠着微妙
得罪冒犯 自己不知道 抱歉

你病的不轻。半瓶水晃荡。我打心眼里瞧不起你。一点风度都没有。

 

[sabre的马甲]

你病的不轻。半瓶水晃荡。我打心眼里瞧不起你。一点风度都没有。

没事
我以后少说两句

 

[———]

好好的一个good day 都被你们几个给搅合了。真是高看你们了。

 

[———]

妈的问个问题一堆狂轰烂炸一堆的罪名。

 

[Tin Tin]

吓人……我走我走……对不住扫姐兴了……

 

[sabre的马甲]

抱歉
今天话有点多

 

[———]

吓人……我走我走……对不住扫姐兴了……

赶快走！

 

[———]

抱歉
今天话有点多

不就if you were to吗？非得要冲上火星领个奖杯，踩死我等无知屌丝？

 

[oldbei]

你这个场合不对呀，我们在这里不是讨论信仰信仰的这个话题太大了。

哇，一小时莫来，这形势奏急转直下啊。


俺以为耶稣老师的话对基督徒来说只有正面的效果呢，莫想到，莫想到啊。

搞得婷婷老师也被殃及，真是抱歉。仁慈的上帝啊，大伙儿都莫恶意的情况下，为啥还都要受伤涅？

 

[sabre的马甲]

哇，一小时莫来，这形势奏急转直下啊。


俺以为耶稣老师的话对基督徒来说只有正面的效果呢，莫想到，莫想到啊。

搞得婷婷老师也被殃及，真是抱歉。仁慈的上帝啊，大伙儿都莫恶意的情况下，为啥还都要受伤涅？

咱们外国人 说英语的时候 语气掌握不住 以为随便一句话 可能就得罪人 伤人

这件事 是我的错 我承认

大家进行下一个议题吧

 

[beaucoup]

Over the great bridge, with the sunlight through the girders making a constant flicker upon the moving cars, with the city rising up across the river in white heaps and sugar lumps all built with a wish out of non-olfactory money. The city seen from the Queensboro Bridge is always the city seen for the first time, in its first wild promise of all the mystery and the beauty in the world.。。。。这是the great Gatsby.. 小说里面的一段话!如果，你能看懂，我承认你是懂英文的。。不然，基本就是中国英文。

 

[bloodwolfmoon]

Hence therefore 也可以代替so 避免重复

红衣叔叔：
Hence isn’t really necessary, therefore is good enough to on its own.

 

[bloodwolfmoon]

我最头痛的作家，William Faulkner。三页都找不到句号的感觉，第一次想撕书。

Tin老师好：
I personally think that Faulkner’s the Sound and the Fury was a great piece of literature. His style of writing is similar to Hemingway’s, one of my favorite writers.

 

[bloodwolfmoon]

假如我曾经有钱。反正不是说将来。假如将来有钱、你怎么说？

If it’s in the future, it should be “if I will have money”.

 

[sabre的马甲]

红衣叔叔：
Hence isn’t really necessary, therefore is good enough to on its own.

之间有个逗号的
或者用hence 或者用therefore

 

[sabre的马甲]

If it’s in the future, it should be “if I will have money”.

我有疑问
回头我去查查

 

[bloodwolfmoon]

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Apart from small grammar mistakes, this paragraph gets its point across. As a non native writer I think that this piece deserves a 9/10.