I appreciate your comment. I didn't expect any compliment but I did expect some respectful and positive feedback. You made my day.Apart from small grammar mistakes, this paragraph gets its point across. As a non native writer I think that this piece deserves a 9/10.
Yes I agree. Just ignore my emotional words. I have CPTSD which made me very defensive. I lashed out because I didn't expect to be mocked. I can't tolerate the way some people communicate. My strategy now is stop talking to those people who don't respect. I don't have any right to kick anyone out. It's just an emotional lashing out. I hope they won't take it serious. I was a victim at the first place. I came here to exchange values not to compete or argue. I reply anyone who talk in a respectful manner. Thank you for understanding.I think that this forum should be about learning, and bettering our selves through the English language. However, I don’t think that this forum should be a place to have arguments in. No one has a right to not allow someone from expressing their opinion here, apart from the moderators. Everyone should be equal here.
赞一手清秀的毛笔字这是早上刚刚,给美国顾问公司的邮件。。CC沙特皇家委员会。。看看有什么毛笔。。不过已经发送了
To begin with, As for Saudi building standards and Royal Commission Building Codes, with which would be complied by us. We emphasize on the issue ,of which our steel structure system and EPS Cast-in-place system should been approved by BTI of the Ministry of Housing ,and to apply in KSA.
Could we agree with the followings:
1. The construction method, including inspection procedures and inspection contents, will be declared to RC , as well as the supervision unit .
2. The supervision inspection procedures and contents in the process of construction, of which will be submitted to the supervision unit for approval after the construction drawings have been approved. We will strictly abide by it during the course of construction.
絮我直言,英文有很大的改进空间,第一句就是个incomplete sentence,但猜得到你想表达的意思。这是早上刚刚,给美国顾问公司的邮件。。CC沙特皇家委员会。。看看有什么毛笔。。不过已经发送了
To begin with, As for Saudi building standards and Royal Commission Building Codes, with which would be complied by us. We emphasize on the issue ,of which our steel structure system and EPS Cast-in-place system should been approved by BTI of the Ministry of Housing ,and to apply in KSA.
Could we agree with the followings:
1. The construction method, including inspection procedures and inspection contents, will be declared to RC , as well as the supervision unit .
2. The supervision inspection procedures and contents in the process of construction, of which will be submitted to the supervision unit for approval after the construction drawings have been approved. We will strictly abide by it during the course of construction.