又是低级错误!!!
第四段:
近十年来,上海交响乐团用其世界眼光与格局,已经发展成为一个囊括音乐季、上海夏季音乐节、上海新年音乐会、上海艾萨克·斯特恩国际小提琴比赛、上海乐队学院、上海交响乐团音乐厅、上海交响音乐博物馆等等多样化品牌和拥有多版块国际化平台的“业界航母”,更是在全国探索、引领和推动着行业的发展。
During the past 10 years, Shanghai Symphony Orchestra followed the world class vision and international orchestra structure. It developed and initiated different projects such as professional Music Season, Music in the Summer Air (MISA) Summer Festival, Shanghai New Year’s Concert, Shanghai Isaac Stern International Violin Competition, Shanghai Orchestra Academy, Shanghai Symphony Hall, Shanghai Symphony Orchestra Museum and many other brands and multiple international platforms that explored, leaded and developed our industry throughout the country.
Leaded 是加了铅的意思,比如leaded gasoline, 我们现在用的是unleaded不含铅的汽油.
引领 Lead 的过去式和过去分词都是 led!!!
这段话意思也错了。原文是 用其世界眼光与格局,已经发展成为。。。不啦不啦不啦。。。的“业界航母”,更是 在全国探索、引领和推动着行业的发展。翻译成英文就变成了。。。发展了。。。不啦不啦不啦。。。,从而在全国探索、加铅、及发展了行业。
世界眼光 咱们不讨论是什么意思,但英文 the world class vision 的the 不要,如果要的话就要加谁的眼光 the vision of xxx