回复: ON MY WAY TO IELTS
Outdoor life
It was very strange to me that when we saw people with big backpacks several years ago. As time went (goes) by, camping has become more and more popular and I have become one of them (the kackpackers), who shoulder big backpacks and enjoy their outdoor lives (livings).
There are many different outdoor activities. What I like (the) most is climbing. Many beautiful views are waiting for me to take a look at them (to enjoy or just look at). Breathing fresh air without any pollution and swimming in a mountain stream are all distinctive experiences I will never forget. At the same time (meanwhile), climbing mountains (remove the word mountains) is of great benefit (also a great boon) to (our) physical health.
Outdoor activities do good to mental health too. We are under pressure such as promotion, loans and relationship (,) etc. Being far away (Getting far away) from the city is the best way (one of the best ways) to relax.(,) In doing so (by means of which), we (could) put ourselves into nature (have ourselves immersed in the great nature), which will make us (and) feel that we are real, we are alive and we are happy.