请教斑主我的邀请信这么写可以吗?
还是只写让父母来旅游,不写看外孙出生?
Dear Father and Mother:
After I have lived in Vancouver for 1 year, I always feel the people here is very nice and kind. The good amenities and nice weather are delightful. And Weidong(my husband) joined me in January this year, he brought many gifts you gave to me and talked about you, my dear parents, I miss you very much.
In the end of Apr, your grandson (maybe granddaughter), is also the first baby of us, will be born. You can imagine our excited mood! In this wonderful season, we are happy to invite you to come here for witnessing the most important matter, sharing our happiness of the birth of a new life, as well as accomplishing your travel wish in beautiful Vancouver Island and Whistler. In addition, we have gotten a good babysitter for assisting us. So don’t worry about your travel plan, just come and enjoy your holiday.
After receiving this letter, you can apply for relevant procedures. We hope to meet you here as soon as possible!
还是只写让父母来旅游,不写看外孙出生?
Dear Father and Mother:
After I have lived in Vancouver for 1 year, I always feel the people here is very nice and kind. The good amenities and nice weather are delightful. And Weidong(my husband) joined me in January this year, he brought many gifts you gave to me and talked about you, my dear parents, I miss you very much.
In the end of Apr, your grandson (maybe granddaughter), is also the first baby of us, will be born. You can imagine our excited mood! In this wonderful season, we are happy to invite you to come here for witnessing the most important matter, sharing our happiness of the birth of a new life, as well as accomplishing your travel wish in beautiful Vancouver Island and Whistler. In addition, we have gotten a good babysitter for assisting us. So don’t worry about your travel plan, just come and enjoy your holiday.
After receiving this letter, you can apply for relevant procedures. We hope to meet you here as soon as possible!
