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[dave]

这是他的诗。

 

[dave]

老树进城


斩断百年情结
抹去浓浓绿阴
剩下光秃秃的躯干
便成了城市风景
万物复苏的季节
树木竞相吐绿泛青
满身疮痍的你呀！
挣扎着吐出几缕新芽
你还活着
可生命已经奄奄一息
你心中仍怀念遥远的故土
牵挂着那儿的乡亲
你无法忘记
绿云下绽开一朵朵孩童的嬉戏
稠叶中结满一声声雀鸟的歌吟
如今你满面愁容
医生说你患了“思乡病"
而那些急功近利者
以及唯利是图的人
他们眼里
钞票才是最美的风景！

这也是他写的。这叫诗吗？！

 

[Iwasgemini]

习大大
纵横国际总从容，打黑锄奸整恶凶。
莫道尘间无老虎，须知世上有蛟龙。

红点儿打油诗，俗人有很多，何必劝人退？

 

[小刘子]

因为本来就不是外人放的火

 

[Iwasgemini]

老树进城


斩断百年情结
抹去浓浓绿阴
剩下光秃秃的躯干
便成了城市风景
万物复苏的季节
树木竞相吐绿泛青
满身疮痍的你呀！
挣扎着吐出几缕新芽
你还活着
可生命已经奄奄一息
你心中仍怀念遥远的故土
牵挂着那儿的乡亲
你无法忘记
绿云下绽开一朵朵孩童的嬉戏
稠叶中结满一声声雀鸟的歌吟
如今你满面愁容
医生说你患了“思乡病"
而那些急功近利者
以及唯利是图的人
他们眼里
钞票才是最美的风景！

这也是他写的。这叫诗吗？！

可以啊，读诗歌的人愈来愈少了。因为鼓励的人少了。
大部分太清高，不懂接受。
他这首也算有思想，只是太哆嗉

 

[dave]

诗歌要有诗歌的语言，要押韵。 要含而不露。 我写的英文诗贴一组。
1. Meet
David Du
There’s a long corridor extending to the corner…
You meet her; she’s sitting by the wall,
Her face with a sadness or
Maybe a wandering, languishing expression.
What do you want to do ?
Caress her face or
Say something to her…
However, you understand she
Actually doesn’t want to get any of your
Favours
And neither is she interested in saying hello to you anymore!
The wall – a yellow and white wall blocks you and her.
You understand you are not her shoulder;
All you can do for her is cram
A few dollar bills up into her hand.

2. A surprise in April
David Du
You come to me and give me a great surprise.
Again you open your white skirt
And expose your splendid body.
The buildings, houses, even the birds,
All covering your dress,
And the green lawns recreating their heads
And watching your performance.
However, when I go walking up the street,
I don’t see any of your traces there.
I understand you give me a surprise
Like the day I picked up a $20 bill on the road.

3. Holding hands
David Du
Holding a hand, a wrinkled female hand,
You go walking along a corridor.
From the left comes a sound like a stream
Running into your ear drum; a musical band
Is praying to God;
And on the right side people are walking through to a big
Hall.
Suddenly, another lady comes out of the dining room,
And holds your hand, with a satisfied
smile.
You hold the two lady’s hands and walk in the middle.
You have no exciting or proud feelings,
As you understand, this is your job –
Like a guard, or guide. You
Steer them forward, sauntering slowly, slowly.
4. Yearning of love
Haiku by David Du
A reddish calyx
Covering a pure white silk…
Love of winter lives!
5. Ice and fire
Haiku by David Du
The colour puzzles…
Eye makes a different signal:
Black and white shining.
6. Withered flower
David Du
She used to be standing in front of the garden by the building,
Watching the pines with a laughter
That shook her body like a child spoiled with sun bathing.
She used to bow her head to the gardener or the gardener’s friend...
She even greeted the gardener's dog
With a wave.
A cold wind's coming, she lets her soft, proud head fall.
Dropping off the lawn, lane and courtyard...
Finally, she stands at the shoulder of the pines
With a question mark.

 

[家园小千]

因为本来就不是外人放的火

确信是内鬼？

 

[Iwasgemini]

诗歌要有诗歌的语言，要押韵。 要含而不露。 我写的英文诗贴一组。
1. Meet
David Du
There’s a long corridor extending to the corner…
You meet her; she’s sitting by the wall,
Her face with a sadness or
Maybe a wandering, languishing expression.
What do you want to do ?
Caress her face or
Say something to her…
However, you understand she
Actually doesn’t want to get any of your
Favours
And neither is she interested in saying hello to you anymore!
The wall – a yellow and white wall blocks you and her.
You understand you are not her shoulder;
All you can do for her is cram
A few dollar bills up into her hand.

2. A surprise in April
David Du
You come to me and give me a great surprise.
Again you open your white skirt
And expose your splendid body.
The buildings, houses, even the birds,
All covering your dress,
And the green lawns recreating their heads
And watching your performance.
However, when I go walking up the street,
I don’t see any of your traces there.
I understand you give me a surprise
Like the day I picked up a $20 bill on the road.

3. Holding hands
David Du
Holding a hand, a wrinkled female hand,
You go walking along a corridor.
From the left comes a sound like a stream
Running into your ear drum; a musical band
Is praying to God;
And on the right side people are walking through to a big
Hall.
Suddenly, another lady comes out of the dining room,
And holds your hand, with a satisfied
smile.
You hold the two lady’s hands and walk in the middle.
You have no exciting or proud feelings,
As you understand, this is your job –
Like a guard, or guide. You
Steer them forward, sauntering slowly, slowly.
4. Yearning of love
Haiku by David Du
A reddish calyx
Covering a pure white silk…
Love of winter lives!
5. Ice and fire
Haiku by David Du
The colour puzzles…
Eye makes a different signal:
Black and white shining.
6. Withered flower
David Du
She used to be standing in front of the garden by the building,
Watching the pines with a laughter
That shook her body like a child spoiled with sun bathing.
She used to bow her head to the gardener or the gardener’s friend...
She even greeted the gardener's dog
With a wave.
A cold wind's coming, she lets her soft, proud head fall.
Dropping off the lawn, lane and courtyard...
Finally, she stands at the shoulder of the pines
With a question mark.

对不起，看不懂英文。
你写个中国的我看看？

 

[周雅]

反窜角色表演，也是够卖力的了，值得给6毛。

 

[松花石]

老树进城


斩断百年情结
抹去浓浓绿阴
剩下光秃秃的躯干
便成了城市风景
万物复苏的季节
树木竞相吐绿泛青
满身疮痍的你呀！
挣扎着吐出几缕新芽
你还活着
可生命已经奄奄一息
你心中仍怀念遥远的故土
牵挂着那儿的乡亲
你无法忘记
绿云下绽开一朵朵孩童的嬉戏
稠叶中结满一声声雀鸟的歌吟
如今你满面愁容
医生说你患了“思乡病"
而那些急功近利者
以及唯利是图的人
他们眼里
钞票才是最美的风景！

这也是他写的。这叫诗吗？！

怎么变成诗歌朗诵大会了

 

[Iwasgemini]

怎么变成诗歌朗诵大会了

哈哈。
开会了开会了。
不许溜号，不许小声嘟囔。

 

[dave]

当然，我也玩中文诗，贴几首
1,晚秋


曼舞一江冬





枫叶在空中飞旋


她已经结束了 约会


在苍穹中 留下一抹 红艳


期待着下一次缠绵


鸟 也离开了它的空间


那个 曾经看日月沉浮的枝端


云 也懒得搭理天空


躲在黑洞里 休闲


天， 像一个孤儿 立在宇宙


湖失去了闹喧


没有浪花陪伴





街道 被秋渲染


留下金黄一片


穿梭的人群、 来往的车辆


透过夕阳


泛着一道光芒


落在地上 一幅镀金相框闪亮





风 被秋唤醒


天空不再寂寥


秋 华丽的衣妆 落地





相框 被风吹翻


金光 在大地倒转，吹着口哨





走在街上


穿着那件果戈里牌外套


在市中心 与风赛跑


感觉 心在下沉


听到一种声音


那声音 在夕阳下 如同猿啸


2,放飞春情


曼舞一江冬





天空，收起满脸泪水，


阳光又回到宇宙的眼角


它睁开眼、伸了个懒腰





大地，卷走雪白的衣袂，


青草 成了主角


翩翩起舞、面带微笑。





又看见那个遛狗的老人


牵着那条永远长不大的狗


脸上的皱纹正在开放、 享受着牧神的午后





3,凉山的泪水


曼舞一江冬


你站在那里，泪水汨汨流淌。


就在昨天，那击突入其来的雷掌


本来是要给你的身体来一道灼伤，


可是，那三十张稚嫩的面庞


代替你 接受了祝融的礼物---进了天堂。


你曾无数次看着那些少年穿梭在你的身旁，


你多么希望当他们白发苍苍


还能来到和你一起欣赏阳光。


但是，你知道，这已经成为梦想，


造梦者 依然在空中徜徉，


你唯一能做的就是任泪水打湿衣裳。



4,那一夜，蔚蓝从心中消失


曼舞一江冬





守着她， 一个陌生的灵魂


没有上帝的指纹


只是为了在这片蔚蓝中 观看消沉


守着她，一个白色躯壳


蓝色的目光 已经浊昏


躺在空间 等待着黑 降临


突然明白 我们都是在黑洞中穿越、接吻


红黄蓝白只是黑的陪衬！

5,

平缓的格调


曼舞一江冬


风停止了呼啸


雨 收起了泪角


花 抖动颤音 枝摇

6,青岛海军节有感
曼舞一江冬
因何青岛近来忙，集聚群龙阅海疆。
齐步高音调豪迈，挥旗列队势明煌。
遥观故里添新景，坐思异邦少气昂。
华为荣心开阔界，且期他日美遭殃。

最后第六首是古诗，我是新诗、古诗、英文诗通玩。就是一玩诗的！业余生活就是玩诗！

 

[dave]

应诗友要求，我才将我的诗贴在这里，一般情况下是自娱自乐！

 

[dave]

我最喜欢玩的是藏头诗。贴两首

1，江湖情结


曼舞一江冬


江陵侠客倚天立，湖泊鸳鸯逐浪飞。


情曲一端金石落，结篇不着剑光挥。

2，落差瀑布

曼舞一江冬

落谷粉身方省悟，差池高下一时垂。

瀑流转瞬成涓滴，布帛玉壶无别姿

 

[checkout]

我最喜欢玩的是藏头诗。贴两首

1，江湖情结


曼舞一江冬


江陵侠客倚天立，湖泊鸳鸯逐浪飞。


情曲一端金石落，结篇不着剑光挥。

2，落差瀑布

曼舞一江冬

落谷粉身方省悟，差池高下一时垂。

瀑流转瞬成涓滴，布帛玉壶无别姿

中文新诗写的最好，英文其次，古诗的韵味稍欠点。如有冒犯，请别介意。

 

[recluse]

应诗友要求，我才将我的诗贴在这里，一般情况下是自娱自乐！

老先生对习大大的感情比你深，
你在这方面要加强。

 

[千客万来]

一个p民小案破不了，没啥稀奇，
难的是：任何p民小案都破不了，
而加拿大警察，就有这个值得骄傲的实力。

 

[南望王师]

一个p民小案破不了，没啥稀奇，
难的是：任何p民小案都破不了，
而加拿大警察，就有这个值得骄傲的实力。

这是没有伤亡微不足道不值一提的火，是一场星火燎原的民主之火，总比中共统治下的中国动不动化工厂爆炸炸死XX人，群租房着火烧死XX人来的好!

 

[Iwasgemini]

中文新诗写的最好，英文其次，古诗的韵味稍欠点。如有冒犯，请别介意。

Dave的确写得比老先生好。
同意这个发言。
培养读者诗歌才有市场。
你完全可以鼓励老先生。

 

[shuhaiyanzhong]

你這套嗑敢回國大街上喊一遍我就佩服你是條漢子，哪怕申明說的是加拿大