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A winter without snow


David

A winter without snow

Even though it ‘s time for the Christmas season

As the sun climbs over the city

His face is tarnished

Like a wrinkled tree branch

The sun still occupies the sky

Although the snow struggles to show

Her wings

They sweep the ground, the roof the lawn

Upon which a white mark remains

But the make is not like an exclamation make

it like a cloud

It’s time a performance from snow

But this winter she is very shy

Like a little girl

She doesn’t like to do some shows to the world

Or is it that she is deep in thought?

Or is it that she is taking her time?

Even if she is an actor, hiding behind the stage,

She will only leave her splendid posture at the proper time.

A winter without snow

Even a chilly winter

Replaced the snow with cold rain in the lead role,

Destroying the snow’s body and removing its out line,

It brings dirt and darkness,

It covers the beauty Christmas lights

Where some city houses are decorated

And the lights convey only misery,

Santa usually laughs in snow

But right now he looks as if he could cry in rain

Shivering and trembling


An appointment with the wind


David


Originally tree and leaf were a family.

They were stick together,

Although the rains, frosts

Even bugs were devastated.

However, the leaf is always restless,

As she has an appointment with the wind,

The wind has given her a promise

Bring her travel all over the world.

Although the tree is to be unwilling

to part.

Even take the past story

That they supported their lives in difficulty,

However leaf approaches her life strait forwardly.


Finally, wind comes

He comes so haughty

And comes out of the tree

He understands the tree is not his opponent.

Even the tree has not a qualification

To become a shape of his challenge


Finally the wind has gone

He realized his promise with the leaf

The rest the tree is crying silently and lonely.

The cold moon warms my heart

David


When I go working on way

I always cross this way

A black cat sits there

Her body shakes

Like a leaf is trembling on the tree

Her eyes stares me

As if she wants to talk to me something

But I am tired of talking

Although I understand

I can’t talk to her

The moon climbs the tip of the tree

Shine me and her

I don’t know whether she felt warm

However, I really understand

The cold moon warms my heart.


Shower

David


A shower drips like water from a

dog’ s body

When he crosses the street

Shaking, he walks

Over the lawn, leaves, dirt

And town silently

And then creeps away.


Sun in winter

David

The Sun opens its eyes

Glances at the tree

Its blurred vision like

A near-sighted man

Although in winter it is considered

As a leading actor, a serious fellow

Actually it careens over and around the sky,

The ground, the streets,

And even the city.
人生本来就是一出游戏,有人喜欢玩扑克、麻将、桥牌、有人喜欢渔色、嗜酒、吸烟,总之每个人有每个人的玩法,
本人喜欢玩诗,中国古诗、中国现代诗、英文诗都玩,但都不是很精,这是最近玩的诗,应家园网友之请,贴上家园,希望不会有损家园形象。
 
只是玩诗的。不是写诗的。所以不能登大雅之堂,只能自娱自乐!我喜欢写字,尽管不是文人,你进我的QQ空间会看到我的头像还有我写的字。我的QQ空间是敞开的,任何人都可以光顾。
楼主,把你的中文诗也发到这里来:wdb10:
俺们欣赏欣赏。。。:wdb19:
 
楼主,把你的中文诗也发到这里来:wdb10:
俺们欣赏欣赏。。。:wdb19:
想看中文诗去QQ我的空间,那里有很多。QQ号我已经告诉你了。
先给你贴一首喝火令,也是描写圣诞雨的。看看中文和英文在表达同一件事上有多么的不同,这也是我喜欢中国古文字的根本原因。个人认为汉语之美是任何语言都无法比拟的。

喝火令
曼舞一江冬

雨化霜无影,
风催雪白晶,
思皑贪恋雪飘情。
彤日夕烟销散,
无月照身明。

圣诞灯啼泣,
飞花环道萦,
今夜期盼碧花荣。
辗转流连,
辗转叹霜声,
辗转万般无奈,
伫立听风鸣。

同样还是这个主题用7绝,7律,现代诗,甚至嵌字的手法都可以再表达,但是,英语只有一种表达方式。
所以......
曼舞一江冬是我QQ的网名。
 
求楼主的q 空间

想看中文诗去QQ我的空间,那里有很多。QQ号我已经告诉你了。
先给你贴一首喝火令,也是描写圣诞雨的。看看中文和英文在表达同一件事上有多么的不同,这也是我喜欢中国古文字的根本原因。个人认为汉语之美是任何语言都无法比拟的。

喝火令
曼舞一江冬

雨化霜无影,
风催雪白晶,
思皑贪恋雪飘情。
彤日夕烟销散,
无月照身明。

圣诞灯啼泣,
飞花环道萦,
今夜期盼碧花荣。
辗转流连,
辗转叹霜声,
辗转万般无奈,
伫立听风鸣。

同样还是这个主题用7绝,7律,现代诗,甚至嵌字的手法都可以再表达,但是,英语只有一种表达方式。
所以......
曼舞一江冬是我QQ的网名。

:wdb17:
楼上的荷mm,楼主的qq是1662232999:wdb32:
楼主,你的qq设置有问题,不允许加好友。。。:wdb12:
 
:wdb17:
楼上的荷mm,楼主的qq是1662232999:wdb32:
楼主,你的qq设置有问题,不允许加好友。。。:wdb12:
是的,因为,我已经发过严正声明了。原因是我的QQ号已被盗多次,骗子总打着我的旗号在国内招摇撞骗,所以,我做了限制,只有我个人认为不是骗子的,我可以把ta加进来。幸亏现在在QQ空间的这些网友都知道我的品行,不然,可能还真有受骗者。
 
是的,因为,我已经发过严正声明了。原因是我的QQ号已被盗多次,骗子总打着我的旗号在国内招摇撞骗,所以,我做了限制,只有我个人认为不是骗子的,我可以把ta加进来。幸亏现在在QQ空间的这些网友都知道我的品行,不然,可能还真有受骗者。
建议:
1、空间设置为只有好友能访问
2、装个360防盗号木马有用。。。
 
建议:
1、空间设置为只有好友能访问
2、装个360防盗号木马有用。。。
谢谢你的建议,我个人感觉:空间就是让人进入的,没必要不让人访问。再说,不是每一个人都喜欢访问我的空间,既来者,说明是一种因缘,人不应该拒绝因缘。
我已经装了盗号木马。谢谢!
 

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