回复: 孩子学习如此辛苦, 妈妈心疼呀.请教大家我们该坚持下去吗
还有没有这位8年级孩子写的作文了？很想多看看。
我儿子也8年级，才来3个月，我儿子说这篇SETTING写得比老外学生还好！我们想多学习学习。
还有，再给你一篇，也是The Outsides的DECRIPTIVE PHARAGRAPH， 这次是描写冒险的setting。老师的评价是：You，sir，are a writer.
Setting: Aboard the train
Mood: Adventurous
Boarding the train
Two shadows crouched in the dense vegetation besides the rusting, dirty railroad tracks. They stood, unmoving, waiting for the distant smudge, coming from over the hills. It grew steadily larger as it approached its stop. As the battered, old train came to a screeching halt, two boys swiftly dashed onto the shelter of an empty boxcar. The shrill sound of the whistle still hung in the air as the familiar scenery began to fall behind. Safe from the pursuing railroad workers, Ponyboy and Johnny slumped against the rough, wooden walls of the boxcar. The train picked up speed, and the landscape became a green blur, dotted with flashes of yellow and whiter from the meadow flowers. The musky aroma of the wood, along with the rocking of the train, soon drove the exhausted Ponyboy into a heavy sleep. In the distance, the sun was rising up from the horizon, casting the meadow in golden rays; the boys’ escapade has begun.
