我想最后一句从中文的角度你猜都能猜到什么意思。但逻辑不通,而且读起来特别别扭。
“I came to Toronto 6 years ago. I have had a full time job since 4 years ago. And now I have a part time teaching job at a public college. At the beginning I am very worried about my English and do not know if I can teach courses in English. But later, I finished one course in one semester even some students said I had language barrier. I think I can stand on that stage to teach in English, which is the fact that I am successful.” 这是原文。我试试按照原文的意思重写,大家商讨.
I have been in Toronto for 6 years now. I have had a full time job for 4 years. And now I get a part time teaching job at a college At the beginning I was worried about my English and did not know I could teaching courses in English. But later I did teach one course in one semester and did very well even some students said I had language barrier. I couldn't image I can stand on that stage to teach in English. I belief I am successful in teaching in English.
俺来抛塑料引玉一哈。
第一句: came to xxx yy years ago 是不是比 have been 用法更自然,更普通。用have been 能加分吗?
第二句:have had for 4 years 显然比since 4 years ago地道。
第三句:get 不如 have 好。get 是一次性动作而have是持续性动作。综合一哈,可说I've got。
第四句:用过去时态的绝对要加分的,特别是Later都finished的了,肿么好at the beginning I am呢?could后面要用动词原型哦。考虑是否在加个if, 奏是I didn't know if I could。
第五句:(什么but, 一定要howEver, 懂不懂?玩笑啦,Papi酱的梗
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)barrier应该是可数的吧?语法填空题还做得不够哟。
第六句:Imagine there is no country, I wonder if you can.为啥辣么多淫喜欢把image当动词用涅?stage这个词是不是商榷一哈?有点儿太高大上鸟。可不可以简化成I had never imagined that I could teach an entire course in English.?
最后一句:不是比利付而是比利吾。动词动词动词!是不是用I think奏好啦?比如,I think being able to teach in English is a small achievement in my life.