同情。楼主很多论点还是不错的。但是,如果没律师,打赢官司的可能性几乎为零。
英文问题太多,比如第48条:
She is being treated and was no longer unable to work 这个double negative意思就完全反了。应该是She is undergoing treatment and has not been able to work
I myself began spiritual pains 这个,人家会以为你加入了什么邪教组织。应该是 I myself began to suffer from mental anguish.
诉状递上去之前应该找个人把把关。